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What’s Wrong with This Advert? – Winston Marsh

Here’s another great blog from Nick’s Aussie friend (and business guru)  Winston Marsh.

And have no doubt that Winston knows what he’s talking about. Nick recently obtained two excellent clients from a single advert drafted by advertising expert Winston!

What’s wrong with this advert?


This advert was run by a local cafe recently. I do hope it worked for them but I suspect it didn’t produce the results they intended. It’s a while since I saw it so I don’t know how the cafe is doing but the advert could have been so much better. Let’s have a look at what could be done to improve it.

To read the rest of Winston’s fantastic blog click here.